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  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Weight of the Water

    The weight of the water is crashing down on me, pounding me, beating me, and tormenting me. The murky depths of its current swirling around me, seeping into my nostrils, ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Kisses in the Rain, Sunsets on the Water

    Amazing. Your poem is incredible. I like the imagery and descriptive details of the forces of the earth you used to bring your poem alive. It made me feel like ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: lost love

    Damn, that was really deep! I don't know who did that to you or whether not this poem is a real event of something that took place in your life ...

    Nov 24, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chasing the Wind

    Wow! I'm not sure what the metaphor was but I do know that the poem was deep. I thought that what you wrote was deep and meaningful and that it ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love You Forever

    Beautiful. I loved what you wrote. I felt what you feel. I really connected with you on an all time high. Your essence was the beauty of what you wrote. ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Beautiful Lady

    I should have never meet her I hate feeling this way. The first time I saw her I thought that she would be the one to make my life complete. ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: friendship bracelet

    Wow! That was really good! You definetly got your message across and had a pure meaning. You really poured your heart into that piece and I connected with you like ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Short poem: Door to heaven

    Wow! I loved your poem. I thought it was deep and meaningful with a touch of spirituality. The only thing that I didn't like about it, was the fact that ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream

    Wow! That was incredibly amazing! You had me thirsting for more excitment and anticipation of what was going to happen next. You created extraordinary detail in this piece and captivated ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Handkerchief

    See I really enjoyed this piece. The message that I thought you were trying to depict is someone who is lost and alone. Broken and afraid. Possibly trying to find ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: To Swallow a Swallow

    I liked what you wrote. I have a really good vocabulary but your poem was kind of hard for me to understand. One of the most important things as a ...

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    My soul trembles I can't inhale Love is holding me My heart is beating Body quivers. Somethings stirring deep inside me Grasping me Taking me Love, Love.

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New to the Website!

    Hey, whats up everybody! I'm new here. So I'm just saying hi!

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Colors of Me

    Cool

    Nov 23, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Sleep

    Love it

    Nov 23, 2008


There is only one success: to be able to spend your life in your own way, and not to give others absurd maddening claims upon it.
— Christopher Darlington Morley