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Re: The Weight of the Water
The weight of the water is crashing down on me, pounding me, beating me, and tormenting me. The murky depths of its current swirling around me, seeping into my nostrils, ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Kisses in the Rain, Sunsets on the Water
Amazing. Your poem is incredible. I like the imagery and descriptive details of the forces of the earth you used to bring your poem alive. It made me feel like ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: lost love
Damn, that was really deep! I don't know who did that to you or whether not this poem is a real event of something that took place in your life ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Chasing the Wind
Wow! I'm not sure what the metaphor was but I do know that the poem was deep. I thought that what you wrote was deep and meaningful and that it ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Love You Forever
Beautiful. I loved what you wrote. I felt what you feel. I really connected with you on an all time high. Your essence was the beauty of what you wrote. ...
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Re: Beautiful Lady
I should have never meet her I hate feeling this way. The first time I saw her I thought that she would be the one to make my life complete. ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: friendship bracelet
Wow! That was really good! You definetly got your message across and had a pure meaning. You really poured your heart into that piece and I connected with you like ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Short poem: Door to heaven
Wow! I loved your poem. I thought it was deep and meaningful with a touch of spirituality. The only thing that I didn't like about it, was the fact that ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Lyrria; The Beginning- The Dream
Wow! That was incredibly amazing! You had me thirsting for more excitment and anticipation of what was going to happen next. You created extraordinary detail in this piece and captivated ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: The Handkerchief
See I really enjoyed this piece. The message that I thought you were trying to depict is someone who is lost and alone. Broken and afraid. Possibly trying to find ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: To Swallow a Swallow
I liked what you wrote. I have a really good vocabulary but your poem was kind of hard for me to understand. One of the most important things as a ...
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Re: Love
My soul trembles I can't inhale Love is holding me My heart is beating Body quivers. Somethings stirring deep inside me Grasping me Taking me Love, Love.
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: New to the Website!
Hey, whats up everybody! I'm new here. So I'm just saying hi!
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Colors of Me
Cool
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Sleep
Love it
Nov 23, 2008
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