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  • Narrative Poetry Re: the eternal dream

    Wow! I think out of all the poems that I have read since I joined this website, your poem is my most favorite. You completely captivated me and drew me ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Way To Live

    Simple, but effective. I loved it! You didn't give the reader too much and didn't exaggerate on extreme detail. You kept it simple and conveyed to the reader the feelings ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dead And In Love

    Wow! I really enjoyed this piece. I thought that it was written very well and original. You really drew me in. The reason why I enjoyed the poem, is because ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dear Beauty, Dear Butterfly

    Dear beauty, dear butterfly, your wings are upon the shore. The flutter of your wings fall like rain, making the tides of the ocean water seem like magic. There is ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: He Sits By The Fire

    I really enjoyed your poem. It was sweet and simple. You told a story and you told it well. I liked how I received that cozy warm feeling, of heat ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Whispers of What we Lost

    Man, I really enjoyed this piece! I was immediately drawn by your words and captivated by the flow of your poetry. I know we have all lost something, in search ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I'll Fly Away

    Wow, I loved this piece! Your poem hit home in my life and kind of defined what I have been going through lately. Sometimes I feel so lost. I feel ...

    Dec 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Light of the World

    I have seen a light, it has dawned in my heart and has moved in my soul. Who is this man they all call Christ? Who is this one, who ...

    Dec 3, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I Held Time in my Hand

    I loved your poem and your words flowed so beautifully, but why did this person hold time in his hands? What was he lingering unto? What couldn't he let go ...

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The girl with the wild look in her eye

    Wow, absolutely incredible. I wasn't expecting that end but amazing. You always think that most poems and most gifted writers would end with something happy or with something that brings ...

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: It Brings me to Tears

    Wow, a very amazing and interesting piece. It was written so well and had no errors that I could see. I felt your passion, I felt what you were going ...

    Dec 2, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Cry the Mist of the Rainbow

    Deep inside of my heart I feel so afraid, alone, and abandoned. I cry the mist of the rainbow. I feel like the world is revolving around me and no ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Forbidden

    I really enjoyed this piece. It sparked my imagination and hearts burning desire for the unknown but yet all familiar. The Elizabethan words brought chemistry and definition to your poem ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: the last tree.

    I liked your poem. I thought it was deep and heart felt. I wasn't really sure what you were talking about though but I enjoyed it. Sometimes it's hard for ...

    Nov 26, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Always you

    Amazing. Simple but sweet. Draw me in more. Give me a beef sandwich, not a hot dog. I know that there is more passion to your writing and ability. I ...

    Nov 26, 2008


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