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Re: Inspiring lines from songlyrics
"This land is mine but I let you rule, I let you navigate and demand, just as long as we know this land is mine." - Dido: This Land is ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Who Takes My Heart and Whose I Take
Lord be witness of the one Who takes my heart and whose I take: Forever guard You these true vows, which Trials of evil cannot break. And time will come ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Lonely
I enjoyed this piece. I thought it was good. You drew me into your world and made me become apart of it. I know what it feels like to be ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: The touch of a vampire
Wow, to be honest I really don't know what to say when it comes to this particular poem. I thought that you had a great ideal going but it just ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Love I Have Found
Wow! For your first time of submitting this poem, I have to say that I am really impressed by this piece. It was simple but possessed an elegance that was ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Hi
Yeah. Probably a lot of it has, but I have a few favourites that most people haven't heard of. :lol:
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Who am I
Candle lit fires Stars in the sky The sun in the morning A carousel in the moonlight Dreams upon a mountain Animals that speak Buds that bloom in the winter ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Our Dance of Love
Wow! Some of you writers are incredible. I mean I really enjoy being apart of this website and being able to see young writers become great writers. Your poem was ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: I am fire
This was really good. I have to admit that I really didn't understand it. That doesn't take away the essence of what you wrote but I really would like to ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: This Rose I Give
Wow! This was good. I really don't say that to a lot of writers but I loved this piece. I like the comparison between the rose and your love. Your ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: My Lover and Friend
When I first heard my lover speak, his voice was just a low whisper in the sound of the rushing wind. Barely audible but distinguished nonetheless. His hair was like ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Healing
Wow! You really blew me away with this piece. I mean it was short, simple, but deep and meaningful at the same time. You awakened a deep passion inside of ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
Hey brother. I loved your poem but I thought it lacked essence. I understand that you liked this girl who belonged to another. That's why in your poem you made ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Hi
Thanks for the welcome. :D I got a couple more questions. What other hobbies do you have? What are your interests in movies? What about music? The obvious hobby is ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Connections Part 1 - Lucy
I did enjoy reading both of these. I really like the whole idea, and the way you have broke it up and put it into the different perspectives of the ...
Feb 19, 2009
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