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I really like this, and the ending is really good. I, personally, didn’t think that that was going to happen. So I like the way you surprise the reader and ...

One minute he was [s]in[/s] embraced in sleeps comforting arms predator/intruder/burglar/cat Pick one. For a minute I thought you were an…” [s]Intruder![/s] Get rid of intruder, if you put that ...

I think it is good, but I don’t were you are going with it. I think it is quite repetitive and you have overused the word “Him”, which you started ...

Some very good imageries, e.g. named you a star. I liked the regularity of the poem & how it's structured. The rhyme does help with the flow though I think ...

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Greek

...private high school with intolerable rules and...

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Banned for being younger than me.

Whoo, go London :D Not that I live there. Where did the YWS originate from?

Well in a way, if it's not depressing, it's kind of automatically classified as stupid ^^'

Greensleeves was all my joy, No flower did bloom but for thee; I stole their beauty mine to be, And yet thou wouldst not love me. Greensleeves was all my ...

Banned for being blonde.. or having a blonde avatar.

Mr Rock n Roll - Amy MacDonald