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Make sure you read the Prologue first, or else none of this will make much since when it comes to what happened before. Everything else happened so fast. My meeting ...

Prologue It was a new world. Full of coke, drinks, and easy girls. Who knew I’d be in the middle of it all? I wasn’t from here, I didn’t belong. ...

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Good job, i couldn't stop reading it. How ever did you come up with it? One minute he's just talking to his student, the next he's...well, you know. It's very ...

Very, very good! Well done, if I say so myself. I found a couple mistakes. Minor errors, but still important... "Yes, I remember,I thought to myself." You should put a ...

You've done it, once again. Another wonderful chapter or section to this great novel! But now for the review... It's not of my right really to say this, but I ...

Very good! I thoroughly enjoyed it! But as for the review... "... teased Anna's hair into tangles..." Bravo! I loved the description here. "... random brown rock patters..." I suppose ...

Thank you all for the reviews that you've given me so far. I find them very helpful. Keep reading, because soon I'll submit chapter 1!

I thought this was really good! Only being a prologue it makes me really want to carry on and read the rest of the story. I think the use of ...

The Modelled Daughter The daughters story: Gazing at the dull walls, I wonder; how did i end up here? Five years ago i was the perfect daughter. I thought nothing ...

Prologue We all believe that there is a special someone out there for us; depending on how far we are in life, we don't know who he or she is. ...

Hey guys (and girls!). My name is Septemb15 and I'm new here at the Young Writers Society. I'm shortly going to be writing many stories and novels, so come and ...

Overall, the story went too fast and it had no...point to it. We don't know the characters, and to be honest, they got too comfortable too fast. The kids just ...

Rain pelted the ground outside; bolts of lightening light the sky like a giant torch was being flashed on and off. Mr Rodaway was a difficult man to wake, his ...

Prologue It was a new world, full of coke, drinks and easy girls. Who knew I’d be in the middle of it all? I wasn’t from here; I didn’t belong. ...