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This was very interesting, angels are really in for me right now. So it’s nice to read an angel’s tale for once instead of the repetitious vampire tale. The beginning ...

I AM PULLING THIS NOVEL DOWN FROM THE SITE

Gosh, it just keeps getting better and better. I feel for the characters. Brooke seems like your average pretty girl who's secretly insecure. This is extremely well written, I wouldn't ...

This is really good, just the beginning alone makes you want to sit down with the book all night and find out what happened. I like that the story's written ...

Keith's character is a little complex, the fact that he isn't all hardcore badass like some dealers makes for an interesting title. which i swear will be developed more into ...

Finally the end of the first chapter, sorry it took so long When I got home Laura was in the kitchen preparing what looked like dinner. I tried to avoid ...

I like this story, it's a great beginning, it really captures your attention and the ending leaves you wanting more. There's plenty of questions in my head now, like why ...

Okay, the whole title is going to be explained towards the middle of the story, as for Keith the non-bad or evil dealer, that's just him. He's a loner who ...

This is picking up after the 'my opinion' comment in the library. I hope you enjoy! “Whatever, Jane,” I shrugged. “Fine, you enjoy when Mr. Jones has his way with ...

I've been working on this for a while now. It's about a drug dealer who's an isolated loner....there's more to the storyline, i'm just not good at putting things into ...

This is a very long first chapter, so I think it would be best if everyone saved their comments until the end of the chapter. Right now we're picking up ...

Third period was the ‘something new’ I’d felt in the air that morning. There was a new math teacher for our school; supposedly he was good. “So, I heard this ...

The Crush "There once was a girl who had it all, except him" I’m used to getting what I want. I’ve been spoiled ever since I was little. My father’s ...

Note: this is a short story I wrote for english class, hope you enjoy it. “Thomas.” I was standing at the bottom of the narrow, creaking attic stairs, hoping that ...

This is a great short story, it has everything, so I don't really have to advise anything. I loved it from the title. And personally I think we all know ...