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This is a very short and straight to the point chapter. It’s good, and I like it but…it needs more sustenance, it’s not really…what am I saying, I like it, ...

The introduction paragraph really captures the reader’s attention well. Good job there. As for the use of foreign language, good job, it seems authentic. I’m guessing you’ll be using Cinderella ...

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Dang, this is deep and very good! I like every single word of it. I can't wait to read more, hurry up and write! Just kidding, keep up the good ...

I like this a lot. As stated before, you sound very much like L.J. Smith. I’m liking Blake’s character, he almost reminds me of Damon from the Vampire Diaries (the ...

This is a very descriptive piece; it’s very long by the way. Honestly it reminds me of something L.J. Smith would write, it’s similar to her voice, that’s a good ...

I’m not quite sure about this story to be honest. It’s too…blunt and to the point. I can’t imagine a person—Danny, yelling at his cousin when he’s supposed to be…I ...

I like this a lot, seriously. It catches the reader’s eye well. I love villains, and Bentley may just become my new love in life. I like his ruthlessness, and ...

I like this chapter, it’s short and to the point and full of suspense. And it answers my question on what happened to poor Skittles. I wouldn’t advise to change ...

Great opening, very catchy stuff, really. Only a few errors, for example: Ipod is iPod . And you’ve got sqeezing instead of squeezing , suprised instead of surprised . But ...

Ah, I like this chapter as well, we get a little description on Marcy and a little more suspense in the end with the return of the very much alive ...

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