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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lullaby

    Hello Buranko! First of all, I would like to say I really enjoyed your poem. it is so sadly poetic to have a father who is far away from their ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Friendship's Rose

    Hello, Annie here to leave you with a short review! First of all, I really enjoy this poem. To see relationships with people as something that is delicate like a ...

    Oct 16, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Things I Want to Tell You, Part One

    Wow! First of all, this was such a powerful piece. i could feel the speaker's emotions as they talked about wanting to be with the person they are speaking of. ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Breaking heart

    Hello, Anniepoo here to leave you a review on this amazing poem. First of all, there seem to be some typos. One example of this is how "don't" in your ...

    Aug 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Happy Memorial Day: A Remembrance Poem

    Hello Anne here for a quick review! First of all, I really enjoyed the message of this poem, on such a fitting day too. Happy Memorial Day! I noticed a ...

    May 28, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Two

    Hello, sorry about the random blank comment that I left, my computer seems to be a bit off today.Butttttt, anyhow, I am here to review your SECOND CHAPTER. Woo hoo, ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter One

    Wow. This was such a great way to start a book. I was very intrigued from the very start. I only have a few suggestions. First of all, the french ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Captain

    Wow, I really enjoyed reading this work Cathe. I will have to look into reading more of your writing. I really enjoyed the beginning of your poem, how serious it ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: What

    Hello 4revgreen, Anne here for a review. First of all, I really enjoyed your poem, it was such a joy to read. I really like how you used what at ...

    Apr 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: carpentry, trivial i know

    Hello, Anne here for a review! First of all, I thought that your outlook and general message of this poem was very intriguing. From the very beginning, I couldn't wait ...

    Dec 19, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magic

    Hello, Anne here to leave a review! I really enjoyed the simplistic manner in which this poem was written. There are a few things that I suggest changing though. Your ...

    Dec 19, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Father

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very insightful without being too overly aggressive. The only thing that I would change is your last stanza. It does not seem ...

    Dec 19, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Never Forget

    Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And how approperate to post it... I appreciated the simplistic style that you used. Everyone was shocked......I do have a few suggestions for ...

    Dec 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: After All These Years

    Hello, Anne here to leave a review on this wonderful review day! First of all, I felt as if your poem was easy for a reader to connect to and ...

    Oct 1, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hello, Darling!

    Hello, Anne here for a review. I just read one of your more recent poems and it inspired me to dig through your thread a bit. So, here I am ...

    Oct 1, 2018


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