Annasutton

I like you story. I like that you put dialogue in your story and you had a good amount. I really liked master Song. Maybe put a little bit more ...

I like your story. I liked that you put dialogue in your story. In you story towards the end it has dialogue and in the dialogue i like that you ...

It is a really good story. I like Tian Ming I liked that you put dialogue in your story. I Wonder if you could put more dialogue so you have ...

It is a good story. I really liked the character cheng. I wonder if you could be clear with who is talking in the Dialogue. Maybe put a little less ...