AnnaMamaLama

Thanks for the reviews! :) I didn't want to make it too intricate so I kept the simplicity of it and occasionally used a bit more ornate wording :) I'll ...

The main character's name was meant to be kept a secret, I'm planning on revealing it later on. And I noticed that mistake after I posted it, I'll change that ...

Yeah, I know it's quite long, but I'll be honest with you, that's just half of it. I wrote another one thats about fifty pages long, so I'll post that ...