AnnaFantasy

I tried not to sound so defensive, but as far as the story idea I was pretty proud of it. I know my writing needs improvement and was looking for ...

Alright, I respect that ;). I'm the same way, sometimes people just bash me for it a lot :(

Grammatically, I have always heard "Things lay, people lie". To lay is to put something down and to lie is to rest or recline. I honestly don't know why when ...

Again, awesome. Good twist at the end, I thought he/she was a goner haha. A few things that confused me, though. Who is Sebastian? And is this attacker like a ...