Anna09

I'll be honest, I don't think there is much I can say. This is just not the stuff that I normally I'll do my best to point out stuff that ...

Hello! I saw that this was for the Imagine contest, and since I also entered the contest I thought I would help... Reading over, that makes very little sense. Hm. ...

Okay, I'm not very good at grammar, so I'll do my best to stay away from that, and just comment on the story. Overall, I felt something was missing. Yeah, ...

Wow, great story! I was worried that there wouldn't be a happy ending, so I was pleasantly surprised. It was odd at first, how you jumped through time, but I ...

Hello! Everything I say is simply my opinion, feel free to throw it all out. :) I bathed in it’s warmth. She just woke up, covered in sweat, yet she ...

Wow. Awesome piece! I will try and help, but honestly I'm not sure how much I can help it, as it is already very good. Hm. For a title...For some ...