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Re: Department Stores
Hello! I saw that this was for the Imagine contest, and since I also entered the contest I thought I would help... Reading over, that makes very little sense. Hm. ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: The Forest
I'm not sure if this should be here or in the fantasy section, but I'm pretty sure it should be here. This is part of the 'Imagine' contest. Well, I ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Masked Ball
Okay, I'm not very good at grammar, so I'll do my best to stay away from that, and just comment on the story. Overall, I felt something was missing. Yeah, ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Lion Hunting
Wow, great story! I was worried that there wouldn't be a happy ending, so I was pleasantly surprised. It was odd at first, how you jumped through time, but I ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Haven
Hello :) This is my first work to post, and it's the beginning of a story. What I'm thinking is that it's the beginning of a novel-type story, but I'm ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: nvm 5
Hello! Everything I say is simply my opinion, feel free to throw it all out. :) I bathed in it’s warmth. She just woke up, covered in sweat, yet she ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Wow. Awesome piece! I will try and help, but honestly I'm not sure how much I can help it, as it is already very good. Hm. For a title...For some ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: *waves* Hello y'all!
I have read about the 2:1 review thing, which means that I need to go review some :) My NaNo... There are secrets, and then they are secrets. Michael has ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: *waves* Hello y'all!
Hello :) I found this site by the writer's digest 101 sites, and am really glad I did. I'm a big NaNoWriMo-er, but after November I was at a loss ...
Jan 3, 2009
