Anna09

Thanks in advance :)

Nitpicking time! I close my eyes and pretend that I’m not here, but it doesn’t work . I whisper to the wind that everything was ok, to learn to let ...

Thank you both for your reviews! okkervilpuddle: The sentence you mentioned was one that I wrote and re-wrote, which probably gave it that overworked feeling. I see your point on ...

I honestly can't find a little box to categorize my story, so I'm posting it here. It's actually really short, just a little flash. Alas, it's here, it's done, and ...

Someone else has already pointed out the grammatical mistakes that I was intending to point it. Overall, I really liked it! I think that you should expand upon this, and ...

Wow. Nice job! Normally I go through stories and tear them apart, finding too many grammatical mistakes for my sanity. Your story though? Couldn't find a mistake. The story itself ...

Funny thing is when I tried to take one of his paintings away ; you fought and screamed with all your might. A semi-colon separates two ideas, it can be ...

Normally I would go through and point out grammatical mistakes, but it seems as though someone has already beaten me to it. ;) On the story itself... I was confused ...

Hey! I saw that your story had no comments, so I thought I would give my thoughts. Please note they are only my thoughts, feel free to throw them out ...

I recently saw Avatar in 3D with a friend. The graphics were simply breathtaking-- truly spectacular. :shock: The storyline? It is basically a retelling of the Europeans (Spanish/English mostly) when ...

Normally I would go line by line and give you every little grammar problem that I see, but it seems like someone's beat me to the punch. Overall, I really ...

First off, I loved the prologue! It was well written, and it caught my attention. Good job. :) F rom the first moment I knew that this wasn't going to ...

Matthew was a big man, a strong man , with a dramatic black beard and a naturally commanding voice. I think that's a bit awkward. It would sound better if ...

Okay! *rubs hands together* Let's see what I can find... “I don’t think we should continue being together . “ H e said calmly. Right off the bat you have ...

Hey! So I'm going to tear your prologue apart...'cause that's what I do. :D Of course, feel free to throw anything I say out, most of it is simply my ...