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Re: The Monster That Is Mine
I love this poem! it really capture the emotion of loving someone that does horrible things and that even knowing all that he's done she can still love him. You ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Stay with me
Its a great theme and it is a really great poem! But it could be even greater if you redraft it with a different rhyme scheme.
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: I can't stop you now.
I liked this poem a lot! It has great rhythm. I didn't like the last two lines though but everyone likes different things, right?
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Shadows and Sunshine
Great poem!! love the symbolism!
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Gifts
I really like this poem! The rhythm is great and the subject immediately makes the reader imagine what a witch-child is and makes stories fly inside your head. I love ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Death of All Men
I love this poem and think that you used rythm really well. I love the story of the poem. I have to agree that maybe you could use better words ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: Lonely valentine
Lonely Valentine On this fine and exhilarating day, Freindship and precious love flys the bright streets. Show your freinds your love and kindness you may, or you can your one, ...
Feb 10, 2010 -
Re: Floral Rainbow
Floral Rainbow Roses are red, Violets are blue, You have my heart, For I love you. Daisies are white, Heather is pink, Without you here, My heart will sink, Foxgloves ...
Feb 10, 2010
