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Re: Forever Forgotten - Prologue
I really think this story is very interesting! There is very little mistakes which makes my job a lot easier thank you for that! My corrections are in blue! After ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Blood Bond
HI Anigamer here to review! I noticed lots of mistakes but very little ones my corrections are in blue! PROLOGE In the beginning you should explain more about what happened ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (1) *edited*
Hi anigamer02 here to review i personally love it! my corrections are in blue! I walked into Stacy's house comma feeling a breeze from the air conditioner. It was burning ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Love and Other Stupid Emotions<3
Hi Anigamer02 here 2 review! Well overall i like the story line the only thing i found some punctuation mishaps and some other things. My corrections are in blue! The ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: I think I love an assassin
Wow~! I like it! A not very amazing guy falling in love with some super hot and smart chic ! the thing i liked the most was how u put ...
Aug 8, 2010