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Re: After the Blast
Hi Meme, I liked this up to a point. The first paragraph was funny, informative, beautiful, well worded...but then the second one kinda made my head spin. It just didn't ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Free
Like Meme (Mimmi) I've read a load of stories like this, but never in this form. I think the form of writing enhances the piece, simply because it manages to ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: をすべて満たすためにニース ;3
Hey Ani, I like you. :D I also love anime - manga's more my thing but it doesn't matter. (FMA is amazing!) Welcome To YWS. I hope you like it ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Away
Hey Flux. This is quite an emotional -If that is the word I'm looking for- story. Your MC has a problem, most likely the fact that he's delusional and that ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Eternal Kiss
Hey Emmy, Anger here as requested. As snow dies to a fire, I don't know why but this line just doesn't sit well with me, it makes me confused. How ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: WRFF and liquor(Opened after brief scuffle with internet...)
Pari, Done. Emmy, I'll be getting to yours. I'll make sure to be done by midday tomorrow.
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Nicholas : Part One {final edit}
Seeing as I've read a story a tad similar to this, my feelings might be a bit conflicted Okay, on to the review. I completely agree with what Calligraphy said ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: WRFF and liquor(Opened after brief scuffle with internet...)
Bubbly Child, Tis done.
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Caning Children
Is caning good or bad and is it really effective and necessary? I don't think caning is good, effective or necessary because I've seen people being caned, I've lived around ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: (third edit) Power of Pop Secret- Erik's View- Part 1
Hey Bubbles, Sorry I'm sort of late. The reviewers before me have dissected this piece correctly, and I might not have that much to comment on without repeating them. I ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: WRFF and liquor(Opened after brief scuffle with internet...)
Perse, Done. Bubbles I'll make sure to get yours done in the next few hours. (No liquor for you...Only apple juice.)
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: A Questionable Drink (Rated 12+)
Hey Perse, Anger here as requested. You know how much I love your work, so I won't waste too much time gushing about how amazing a write and poet you ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: How Can I Forget?
Hey, Anger here. I personally didn't like. I get that this is meant to be an emotional piece, but there is an insane amount of repetition. After a while all ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Keeping Things Unpredictable: The Dos
Rachael, you're too awesome for words.
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: The Waking Hours (1/3)
Hi Evi, I really like this story, I think the name struck me and that's why I had to read it. Plus I've been going through a bit of a ...
Dec 30, 2010
