AngerManagement

the jester

Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl who lived in a town beside the forest. Formerly the town had been a peaceful one and thousands of people had ...

The soft beautiful sunlight falling on the French windows in front of the house reflected Sasha’s pale face, I don't know why but your imagery bothers me. Sometimes I feel ...

Hello, I'm Anger and I'll be your reviewer for the day. For me this poem is too short to really make an impact. I get the general message of the ...

What brought me to this was the name, it really drew me in. I think you've explained what you meant by 'The Truth Sits' but I can't help but to ...

I like the idea that all roads lead somewhere, but after a while the idea devolves because it slowly becomes rambles. I believe that if you developed the character a ...

The sight of you, made my knees go weak, and I wondered if you still cared. The sight of you, made miss all the things we shared. The sight of ...

Perse, it's been a while since I've reviewed anything by you, so here goes nothing. This is very impressing, in fact it's one of my favourite poems by you. It's ...

I liked this, it was an interesting read. Quite impressive that you could your thoughts into sentences and then into a piece like this but on the other side you ...

This was very entertaining a bit on the over-dramatic side. I think you could have interpreted your MC's emotions better in a way by developing on how he feels, and ...

I quite liked this but it wasn't as dark as expected. Very self-deprecating though. It's too short for me to really say anything tangible about it. It was definitely well ...

Personally I really liked reading this except the first paragraph threw me off. I don't think it's the best note to start with. It was a very sweet love poem ...

Like Dudette I like the shortness of this piece but I think there are bits where it would have been wise to add a bit more description for example longish ...

Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this story. Somehow I'm in the middle of liking it and hating it. It seems to be quite rushed, and the characters ...

Dun Dun DUN! --Busted. ---- Nothing was working, everything felt like she had been welded to the floor by some master craft's man and even her vision blurred. I don't ...