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Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)
Thaddeus McQuinn-Triplock- Henderson's Bank, 2:23pm. Thad popped a wine gum into mouth while watching the various people walking into the bank. They didn't know what was coming up but he ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: The Conscience: Epilog
I'm not trying to be harsh or anything but for the love of all that is righteous space your story into paragraphs. Its incredibly hard to read it and its ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: The Six
Chiekh Nothing compares to the feel of blood on your skin. That invigorating power, that makes you feel like you could do anything. Like you had a reason to be ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: Pond Daze
Hey Jane, “Mommy, can we go now?” I whined as the four year old me tugged on my mom’s oversized, blue t-shirt. I feel like this line was a little ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Scattered: No Longer Retired (full)
Name: Thaddeus McQuinn Alias: Triplock Age: 52 Gender: Male Appearance: Thaddeus is 5ft 9, He is of average build. He is often found wearing a hat and smoking a pipe ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: City of the Six DT
Name: Cheikh Serkah Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Che is 5'8, has blue eyes and brunette hair. His hair is cut quite short in order for him to blend in. ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Enemy Of State.
This was incredibly rushed...I blame Write or Die and thank it at the same time. Oh and this might be my Julnowrimo thingy. Enemy Of State (I might change the ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: wHAT Up BABies!
Hey!!! Welcome to YWS....I WANT that fishkitty it's so cool.
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: A Midnight Walk Through Zombie Park: Chapter One
Hey Shadow, Anger here. Firstly I'd like to say that I'm not used to the Zombie genre so it may sound like I'm being harsh. Now that we get each ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Song I Heard In A Dream
Hai Razster :P, Anger here As Ducky said there really isn't anything to correct so I will just pick key points that i found really hard to understand. But I'd ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: My Pictures
Hey Duckie. :D, Anger here. I really liked the first picture in fact its my favourite picture out of all three of them! I really like it the way its ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Inspiration Day.
I know this is completely unplanned but it's for Jen's Contest....So. Happy Reading. I sat at the edge of my desk, my biro in hand and its cover in between ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Kidnappers
Name: Lucas Rhyder Age: 18 Gender: Male Kidnapper or kidnapped: Kidnapper Personality: Lucas is very conniving; he could say something yet mean something else, he's very sociable, he's always cracking
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Location Unknown: Mission Failed
Lizzie I didn't really understand what was going on. I just felt a bit out of the loop, well i kept my self out of the loop. As you know ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Match Maker
Last Paladin and Miley Cyrus Bolt and DQ Bolt and Justin Bieber That girl is ugly, man. But at least she could buy me stuffs. Also, Angermanagement and a pair ...
Jun 17, 2010
