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Re: Asteroids
This is for the Capture That Emotion contest. I got Depression so I wrote about how the character devolves into Depression, if you can get that at all. If you ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Character Description
Sitting on the roof --legs crossed, binoculars, a notebook and a choice between hot chocolate or scalding green tea had quickly become Desiree Carmen Burch's pastime. She soon found out ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Strings
When she looked at me with bloodshot eyes, and opened her mouth to mutter words that only she could hear I knew I’d lost her. The realisation hit me, much ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Nationality Headcount at YWS
American: 25 Canadian: 5 English: 11 Filipino: 6 Finnish: 2 French: 2 Indian: 6 Irish: 1 Italian: 1 Puerto Rican: 1 Scottish: 1 South African: 1 South Korean: 1 Welsh: ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Hypocrite
I really liked reading this because as I continued to read through it I felt like I was looking into a distorted reflection of myself and I think it's great ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
Hey CHANG, Normally I don't like poetry like this at all because I don't believe in God but I kind of liked this but at bits of this I felt ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Mr. Angel...[Chapter 1-part one] ALIA
I am tired, I am frustrated and I am lonely. My legs are hurting and I do not have a penny in my pocket. Hey! Wait; don't go there so ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Red Door (Seasame Sleep)
I really really liked this. The opening was great and it threw us into a great scene wherein the main character remembers a therapy session. I think it's a wonderful ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: 结束
Thanks for the reviews, I just got online and could only respond to them today. 1, The Setting: Yes I know it sucked, it would have worked better within the ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: 结束
结束 We knew it was coming, I knew it was coming. We were all resigned to the fact that it was coming, the bowed heads, and bloodshot eyes at the ...
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: --in which i give up on an interesting name
Couldn't get on the internet so there's a couple of days poetry here.. April 7th Apocalypse when the world has lost it’s voice and only it’s inhabitants begin to speak ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: --in which i give up on an interesting name
April 6th -Heather, Heather quite contrary pink cardi- gan short black hair shattered in inconsequential pieces yet so put together -depravity in the sense of the word like a broken ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: --in which i give up on an interesting name
April 5 Constantly having to choose a defining moment in time when all our dreams come true --History or Biology -- Law or Medecine Childhoods submerged in Autumn's rain try ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: --in which i give up on an interesting name
Swim- April 4th she's disconnected from reality, reaching for the skeletons of an anorexic ghost she had named her past. one arm before the other she struggles against a sadistic ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: A Monologue
Hey Sopster, I'm here because well I am. I like this mainly because I can relate to the speaker's voice which is incredibly strong and the vivid imagery in the ...
Mar 30, 2011
