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Re: Monster under my bed
Take my hand And I'll take yours I like the beginning of this. It makes me want to read more of it and it suggest that whoever is asking this ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Wings of Concrete
I really, really liked this. The imagery was amazing, I could visualize the statue and how it would look. I dont see any problem with your rhythm in fact i ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Camp Supernatural [Closed]
Rex Lawson "So now, because society wants you dead, they throw you over to me - just my darn luck!" The camp instructor complained. I tuned out of the conversation ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Watchers Book One: Counting Stars - Prologue (edited)
“Dorio…” “Don’t ‘Dorio…’ me! I’m a big boy, I an handle myself.” Dorio snapped, Full stop instead of comma. turning his back on the young man, ignoring the hurt clearly ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Dawn Reports: Power (1)
It is the reason for wars. It gives reasons to kill, to steal, to destroy. We betray to conquer, we hurt to achieve, we undergo to overcome. Some lose themselves ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Marley
I walked down the church aisle with a single white rose in my hands. My father was at my side, guiding me towards the front of the sanctuary. In the ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Heirs to the Light scene
"Broken Arrow" was the name outsides gave this place. To the dozen weasels sprawled on rock ledges, it was home. Nice introduction to the scene. If hunger doesn't kill me, ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The Real Me
My life's a hidden secret, My thoughts throughly protected, My personality a puzzle, My worries intertwined and connected. No one knows or cares, No one knows what I can be, ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Richard
Hi Adeera, I went to the dance not knowing what to expect when you asked if I'd swing i couldn't reject you swirl, turned, and dipped my me all over ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Camp Supernatural [Closed]
-Name: Rex Lawson -Age: 17 -Gender: (Keep to Ratio) Guy -Appearance: (No emo pics) -Personality: Rex is very childish, he has stupid reasons for doing everything. He never thinks through ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Have Faith in Me
Hi Imagine, I promised her that I’d meet her here, her favorite park down the street from the public library. But it’s been four years. I had moved away because ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: It's Elementaly Mental! (dumb title, i know, will change)
I'll claim Junior Water Mage. Name: Aquila 'Aquil' Mortimer Age: 17 Court: Water-Is Human- Appearance: Aquil has blond-almost white hair- and striking blue eyes, She is also very pale which ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Camp Supernatural [Closed]
Save me a spot for a guy!
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold
Hi Sierra, I picked this story because of the name. I love The Killers! :D .....Alright sooo unto more important things. It was really hard to know who's thoughts were ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: The Six
Chiekh I hid myself in the forests watching my sister get in the stance for a fight. I was a little bit envious, I mean I did call first kill. ...
Jul 16, 2010
