AngerManagement

This was really good. The imagery was great, the storyline was amazing and the conflict just made me keep going. There were little to no grammar mistakes but a few ...

Hey Emilie, I really tried to read this and I got to read some bits that I consider good but it was hard to read anything. Everything is in one ...

Riley I didn't run away, not really. I just went out and never come back. I knew mums heart was going to be broken and dad was going to be ...

Hey Kaywiia, Saying that I liked this would be a huge understatement. I loved it, the description, the flow, the characters voice all complemented this and made it an amazing ...

Hi C *waves* The bodies of fallen surrounded me with eyes frosted open, fixated on me. The bodies of fallen what, I think a word is missing here. Steam still ...

Hi *waves* This was quite different. I liked the dialogue and I liked the transition from being in the car to being at the funeral. With every thump of my ...

Hey Live, This was really cool and I think it's sort of original Almost like your brain is a TV and your remote batteries are broken, there’s no buttons on ...

Finished. Name: Riley Higgins Age (No older than 18): 17 Gender: Male. Appearance: Personality: Riley is a people pleaser but not a pushover. He caves in whenever people ask anything ...

Name: Chris Rock Species: Owl. Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Personality Strengths: Chris is a peoples person, For some reason people seem to find him funny. He is good at ...

Name: Lillian 'Lilly' Hendrick Age: 16 Powers: Electrocution. History: Lillian doesn't know a lot about her previous life, she only knows what Mayer -her boss/pain in the ass- told her ...

Hey Nova, When you your delicate eyelashes rise. small and froze frozen Your perfect, I'm not worth it, Should end with a dot ---> . To be with you, not ...

Hey Nike, It shows a bit that you just did this without thinking because the entire scene doesn't really seem thought out. Your MC didn't really appeal to me. I ...

Chiekh To put it quite frankly I was pissed. If whoever it is that was singing that stupid song sang it one more time I will take my time to ...

Hey Moo, I didn't think this looked at all like a poem. It wasn't in a layout. I felt as if I was reading a sentence or a paragraph that ...

Awww, this really made me smile. At first when I skimmed through this I was like *groan*. I thought it was long and I wasn't going to finish reading it. ...