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Re: I'm here (18+ for a REASON)
Hey Babs, I opened my eyes, and immediately it felt as though they melted right out of my head, a brown-white-grey slime slopping into the vomit and saliva that my ...
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Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
Hey Dragons, I hit the ground running, turned a corner and bolted right into the scaly paw of an enormous animal. I tried to run in the other direction but ...
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Re: Pull your finger out!
3 & 4...But I like the hat one too.
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Re: The YWS Cliques
That is so true. I wonder what clique I'm in? :D
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Re: Owls Mowing Grass: The Storybook
Chris Rock I perched on the wonky orange tree which was in direct view of the all the other owls mowing grass. I mowed sometimes but mostly I was on ...
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Re: Wishing on Stars
Hey Morgan, I really liked this, it was raw and emotional. It was also cute,. It was lively and it was a good read. Keep Writing Anger :D
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Re: This Is How I Say Goodbye....
I was never one to believe in suicide. I always truly believed it was selfish, really I did. I was right too. It is selfish. It manipulates your mind against ...
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Re: Ghosts
Hey Retro, Let me chase my ghosts. Don't try to hold me back. Let my memories haunt me ,-->should be a comma and try to hold me back. Let the ...
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Re: The Lost Heir
Can I claim the lion?
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Re: Lost Hope
Hey Moose, I like your imagery and description, I could picture the sun rising And the surrounding areas response to it. The only thing that bugs me is that we ...
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Re: Intrigue
Hey Razzle. Please tell me I’m not alone, On my own, in this strange A bit confusing because I thought when people where alone they were generally on their own. ...
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Re: V.I.C.T.O.R.I.A.
Hey Tori, I loved the idea and i know how hard it must have been to think of things that made sense to the style you were going for. Although ...
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Re: Heart of Stone<3
Its a bit confusing. I thought that they never really got to know each other? Why would he walk in and kiss her? It seems a bit realistic but it ...
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Re: Runaway Marriage - chapter 1 pt. 1
Hey Ofir. I like the beginning of the story. The reader is informed of how nervous the MC is to be doing whatever she's doing. After that I kind of ...
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Re: The Beat Road
Hey *waves* October’s Monday, morning, a grey drizzle clad the grey town, and the smell of shone-shine This was going great until the bit about Shone-shine. I was like huh? ...
Jul 30, 2010
