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Hey, could you review this for me please. Thank you

Rain begins to fall from a dark, overcast sky, onto a crowd of funeral-goers, standing in front of a closed casket. The people open up black umbrellas and cover themselves ...

Thanks for the review. I understand what you mean about exploring her emotions, I was just trying to cut it short as it was really long and its a 'Short' ...

Could you review this for me please?

I Spy. A juvinile Juvenile game of seek and find. Juvinile, Juvenile yes, but then... let's play a round. Just a test of joy. I spy with my little eye... ...

Hey Jack Could you please review my short story 'Play.Pause.Rewind.' Its for a Contest about friendships and it's generally about what happens when some friendships spiral out of control. It ...

Do please tear this apart as much as you would like to. It's for a contest and I want it to be as close to perfect as it can be. ...

Hey Spyoh, Four years ago they disappeared Good strong beginning. Filled with questions. Why did they dissapear? This makes the reader want to keep on reading. Like they never existed ...

Hey Megg, This was a good story to read. The first chapter was very basic yet you pulled me in. There was a great description of your MC's life and ...

Riley I didn't like this, not one bit. Me in a room with someone from pop control, sitting with a load of teenagers who didn't have I.D's or enough tact ...

Bolt... Where's the mention of you being a woman...? :/ I was searching for that too..

Red stains on the carpet, contrasting brilliant white, the hands that left them, soaked with red, are begging to be cleaned. This was a good beginning. Very shocking, good imagery. ...

Hey Alwaysbeinspired95 I can't find words To describe who I am, If theres a comma before it, it should be a capital letter. Who I'm becoming. I thought it would ...

I can taste the color purple trickling down the back of my throat And feel the unraveling scent of a used bar of soap I like this. Great imagery and ...

A girl named Lindsey was walking down the wet sidewalk and went into an antique store And asked where the bathroom was it’s in the back said the manager pointing ...