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Re: The Lost Heir
Kris Lennon I rested my head on the grass, it was a nice day. By nice, I meant sunny and I was feeling a bit sleepy. I knew I should ...
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Re: Summer
"Summer” Summer is coming, the sun is shining The weather is hot, we better go swimming Sexy girls at the beach, we better take a glance Or will regret it, ...
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Re: .
Hey Pshh It started in the basement. Kids are always afraid of the basement. I loved my basement when I was a kid. But then again, I was a weird ...
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Re: Family Problems
Hey Retro Alice was about 5 foot 7 and had long ginger hair. She had cold gray eyes and faint red lips. She always wore the faintest blue eye shadow. ...
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Re: Moonlight
Hey Scar *waves* Moonlight flittered down through the leaves and onto the forest floor ligthing Lighting up the trees with its soft and silver glow I don't know but I ...
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Re: Originality.
These days, the world lacks color. Originality is what we crave. Dont be like every other. Dont be the world's bland slave. I liked this, the first line really does ...
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Re: I Still Have Hope...
Hey Kayla, lead weights falling from the sky scream to just release my burden The first thing I thought when I read this bit was 'Lead weights don't scream.' Maybe ...
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Re: Why?
Hey Jesse, Why do i I cry, After you cross my mind? This seems awkward, perhaps you could say 'Soon after you cross my mind' Why do I wallow in ...
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Re: Yesterday I found a box
Hey Retro, This was really great to read. It was sweet and emotional but not sickenly so. It was well written and I could only find two spelling mistakes but ...
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Re: The Lost Heir
Sorry, this is really late. Name: Kris Lennon Age: 19 Gender: Female Animal: The Lion Appearance - Written: As a human Kris looks incredibly delicate, she is always straightening her ...
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Re: Wanderlust 2: Revenge
Name: Atieno Lucan Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Occupation: Street Thief, Skills: Pickpocketing, Dancing, Weaving, Lieing, Can see through lies. Personality: Harsh, Can be conniving, Is very nic
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Re: Legend Of The Lunar Stone
My name is Carmine. I awaken on a filthy bed only to be yelled at by my abnoctious obnoxious master, Walt Worth who abuses me and doesn't give me the ...
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Re: untitled
Hey Fell *waves* Everytime I see your face Lightning flashes and lights up your eyes revealing all that you wanted to keep secret Telling me all that you wanted me ...
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Re: Play. Pause. Rewind.
Thanks for the feedback guys. I'm working on the third draft right now. I noticed the grammar mistakes and fixed the awkward sentences. :D
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Re: Beheaded Behemoth (Shirt Art)
Hey Photo, Okay firstly WOW, I would so buy that. Secondly, it seems a bit smudged but that might just be an effect. I preferred the front to the back, ...
Aug 3, 2010
