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Re: My Teacher
Hey Captian Random OMG, I’m going to crack, hopeful hopefully so does his back My friends agree, but my family don’t, try and teach you’re self yourself you dolt I ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Leaves
Hey Pink Dear my little petite leaves, You are born, but only in the spring. With glossy skin, You laugh with joy. I like the way this starts like a ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: The Almost True Life of Kimberly Ronalds #1
Hey Kaywiia First I'll start with the nitpicks. I watched him ride around the neighborhood a few times. Finally, after plucking off enough grass to make a small patch of ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: It Has To Be....
Er....guys I wrote this a while ago. And uhm...I didn't expect that it would be reviewed ages after I have written it. It's so embarrassing reading rubbish that I wrote ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Serenade of Skies
There are so many types of skies. Bright blue of the summer morning, the winds joining it with sighs. The wind joining it with the what? This stanza made sense ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Cody (Part One)
Hi iheartbooks, I'm Anger, your not-so-angry reviewer. :D Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: The Toy Box (The Thread Is Closed)
Viper I stared in awe at the Toy Box, although I had been here before -once or twice- it always seemed to make me take a second and review my ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: The Magic Room *Permission Only*
(Happy now Raz? :P) Slot Filled: Aggarian King. Name: Ignatius Serkus Age: 39 Gender: Male Appearance: Ignatius has dark black hair with tinges of grey, he is 6''7 and quite ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: The Door
Hi, First of all I really liked reading this, even though I didn't find it creepy at all. I agree with StoryWeaver about the fact that this shouldn't be in ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: WRFF and liquor(Opened after brief scuffle with internet...)
Done. :D Metal head, has anyone ever told you that, that is the most atrocious Irish accent in the history of the universe? C'mon guys, you know you want to ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Six)
Hey Metal-head :P Nitpicks Without taking the grin off of his face, Richard took hold of my hand as I shuffled closer to him on the sofa. I don't think ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: The First of Many Part 1 *Edited
Hey Jem, Waking up, Julie Grier didn't need to glance at the alarm clock to know it was too early for her to get up. However, her bladder insisted, and ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Oblivion
Hey H-Dawg :P For a diary entry this was great, it seemed to hit all the right spots. I sympathized with your MC and followed her through her torturous journey ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Dop.
Hey Persephonia, I have noticed that I often find myself stalking your poetry o_O Dop. The ink dripped Again and again Again and again sounds like a bit of a ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Clouds
Hey Lav, I’ve always thought of what touching a cloud would be like. I don't believe this is the best of beginnings, it doesn't exactly hook me into the story. ...
Aug 20, 2010
