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Re: Eddie♥
Aloha :) I haven't reviewed in a while, so do please bear with me. :D I'll be reviewing it in chunks and then later I'll expand on my points. I ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: thursday rehearsal.
I feel like all of this but yeah about the bottle it was luck, god dammit , luck that got me there right on time for me to run in ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: 3:47 am
I should have asked for the universe; strewn upon a diamond platter with a still beating heart- preferably yours- but I didn't, because I see that you breed disappointment and ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Mr no-name
Mr no-name mourns his daughter's loss at Trinity he buys her flowers at Autumn, he rests them on the very steps and watches them trampled- and die. he leaves a ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: walking on clouds
you're trying too hard turning right round so you don't catch your reflection screaming out loud; tearing through pages that've piled on the years till you look just as young ...
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: Space is overrated
Deleted.
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Mind
“Anyways onto business,” he declared professionally as he wiped a smear away from his name tag and pulled out a chair to an empty table for Tory to sit at ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Without conditions
I'm not the best for reviewing romance novels but I'll give this my best shot. Something that really bothered me was the use of > instead of "" and it ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Kaeru: Part #4
Again yet another chapter that I like. But I keep waiting for your MC's world to come crashing down because I'm evil like that. You've created some conflict in the ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Kaeru: Part #2
Hullo Ten, I love this. You'll know that from my previous review but this one's a bit confusing. You start out in third person I believe and somehow you end ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Kaeru: Part #1
Wow, Ten-Ten I'm so impressed. I've read your stuff but I don't think any of them have been as near-perfect as this one. I love your descriptions, your character and ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)
I quite like this. It's quite obvious what is going to happen from beginning to end but you make it easy to digest, you introduce us to both your characters ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Shattered Rainbows
1. Waking up isn't a chore, staying awake is. When I open my eyes, I'm somewhere new, somewhere different and days, weeks and sometimes even months have passed me by. ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: That's What I Thought
Okies, this will one of my first reviews in a long, long time so bear with me. You said you loved me, like the rain in july. You said it ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: unnamed
Currently being edited :D
Aug 20, 2011
