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Is this a nightmare or is it a dream? ---> I don't really like this for an opening line, I think that if your going to ask this question you ...

Hey Pea-brained Welsh person, here as requested, And I loved it. For your first time seriously writing in third person, this was great. You have this knack for bringing your ...

This pleases me very much-ly. Google ads recognize my problem...

I liked this, I can't think of any nit-picks really. I like your writing style, and although this is the stereotypical ghost story you really made it your own. First ...

Hello, here as requested :D Reading this was enjoyable, I went through it rather quickly, and was very disappointed when I noticed I was at the end. Present tense is ...

I've done erm..one. :shock: Must. Review. More.

In a way I kind of agree with Elinor, poetry should be subtle, you shouldn't just spell it out. You should use imagery, and fantaboulous (I know this isn't a ...

Breathe He sat at the table, watching the rest of his family as they cleaned up after dinner, quietly, not a word spoken between all four of them. He saw ...

I really, really liked this. It was a really fun read and you did succeed in making me smile. It was so different from anything else I've read on this ...

Hey Persephoneia, Seeing as your other reviewers have commented on grammar, I'll skip that bit and comment on bits like characterization, conflict etc. Opening: The man blowing his nose was ...

Although I read this multiple times, I don't think I fully understand it. It intrigues me, this story but I think I'm interpreting it differently. After some research (Wikipedia) I ...

Hey Rach, Could you please -pretty please- review this for me-----> . Thank You :D I wish I had a good bribe, but I can't think of one. *FAILS*

Breathe… Currently being edited.... Open after reading. Is this story in anyway linked to this postcard?

Done...and I promise not to leave you again.

Hi BlueShubs...I am sorry for my lateness. But I'm here so lets get on with this...I apologise if I repeat what previous reviewers might have said as I haven't read ...