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Re: Post your desktop
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Feb 2, 2013 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
10. newsflash take account of the lonely footprints in the snow the barren wasteland of a human's mind where your words stop and stare, these clipped vowels that cut your ...
Apr 11, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
8. two steps forward, take none back you've been told all you need to hear now face the world with ears stuffed with wool "you need to see your world" ...
Apr 9, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
5. Cigarettes burn forever sadly, you are always a sickly yellow never bright enough, not even mellow an ochre; parasite like it's no wonder you want to die. 6. The ...
Apr 8, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
(3+4) 3. Soothsaying the searchlights won't find us we're invisible the race and their faults won't reach us we're invincible and floating beyong utopia is not inconcievable. striving for lowly ...
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
2 Content This is laziness, letting the world outside submerge this world that I have created-- It is crumbling and disappearing, fading into a forgotten memory like saturday nights, eating ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
cacophony all I hear are the careful whispers worthless lies, that trickle like raindrops and harden only when they hit the surface, they wrap a cocoon around this flimsy bracket ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Existing for what makes me happy --
Starting tomorrow, can't wait :D NTS: Finish this year.
Mar 31, 2012 -
Re: MARCH MADNESS Poetry Workshop!
I'm in (I think). This sounds fun xD
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: She the Skeleton
Yo :D I like this, but then again it confuses me. I adore the way it's broken up into paragraph and it has the feel of dream sequences, but at ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Reward
Hullo, Anger here :) I'm tired of having to deal with. with what? Structure: It didn't work for this poem because halfway through there is a change in tone where ...
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: The Great Review Challenge of 2012
In.
Jan 3, 2012 -
Re: Wouldn't Mom be Proud
Hello, I'm Anger and I guess I'll be your reviewer for today. I had to check this again to make sure it really was in short stories because it read ...
Jan 1, 2012 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Hai Deanie I haven't ever reviewed something of yours despite my attempts so here goes nothing xD My review will be split into two sections: (1) Repetition and (2) Digging ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: you
I'll wake all night, for glimpses of you bloodshot eyes and manic hair. you are on another plane broken spine, hunched over scribbles on partitions of rubble, you make your ...
Dec 8, 2011
