Angels-Symphony

Social security number thieves xD

3/10 Because "That is what I'd learned" is the wrong tense and grammar. It should be: To be a geisha, a woman must be pure and elegant in thought, words ...

Let's say you're a little kid and your parents don't believe in buying toys. Instead, they give you a wooden stick and tell you to use your imagination. So.... *hands ...

Travel to Indonesia, eat some food, take some pictures, see the sights, and then steal an ancient artifact to sell on ebay to buy my own private island. What would ...

1.When life gives you lemons, command someone else to make it for you.

Title sounds cliche and a bit plain. But then again I like goddesses in certain novels, so I'd probably look at the front picture (xD), examine the condition of the ...

The 360th version of Ammonia, a cleaning chemical.

8/10 When I first read it, I thought it was one of those cliche lines where someone's having a dream and then it gets ruined when they wake up, but ...

Thanks for the reviews ^^

Welcome to YWS, Nadia. I'm Shina ;) one of the instructor-greeters here. It is both my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS. Mizz-Iceberg covered most of ...

I just noticed that even though YWS members say "The pen is mightier than the sword" we have a pencil on our logo :P But the sword and writing utensil ...

Hey Frag ^^ Shina here for a review as promised ;) Sorry I'm late, my sister and I were making a map for my fantasy novel O_O It took us ...

Hey Fates ^^ I'm Shina, and I'll be your reviewer this evening ;) Welcome to YWS! My name is Calvin Gray I'm sure your teacher has told you that "My ...

Multiple 1st person POV's are really interesting if it's done correctly, so you have to be careful about that like Rosey said. You have to make sure each character has ...

Yes, it does make sense, Boni ^^ However, I see a few grammatical errors in both: The open cart creaked incessantly as it bumped and rattled its way over the ...