Angels-Symphony

....Knocked over a truck full of meatballs! Shina stared at all of the juicy, circular beef figures laying on the ground, forcing herself to eat fruit so she can earn ...

7/10 Kind of blurry :P

I'm on it ^^

It could also be gloomy and depressing so can the flute. any insrument that can play a minor melody makes me all gloomy, as much as I love minor. :D ...

Hey Shakira ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Dinner on table, children quiet Maybe adding "the" after "on" Beautiful, rare smile upon his face The flow would work better ...

Hey Dreambeliever ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Music creates an inner delightment, An engraved impression on our hearts, Semi-colon, not a comma. -------------- Dream, I understand what you're ...

you captured All then it faded, twisted. If you're using proper punctuation, why don't use capitalize the first letter in the sentence? black, gray, bits of blue there's yellow too. ...

Thanks for catching those Mira xD I'm not such a good editor. That's why June does it @_@ Well, I'm a bad self editor, which everyone is xD I think ...

I agree with horserider ^^ First drafts are for fun. Second drafts are where you get serious :P Make sure to make hard copies of your ideas ;) Use a ...

Hey Wearebright ^^ Shina, one of the instructor-greeters of YWS. Welcome! It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS ;) Just a few things... Never ...

Looks like every type of of greeting has been here xD So, now for a special song-greeting! Look at this site? Isn't it neat? YWS is a place that can ...

Tnme's, Gsp's, Pinkangel's, Dakota's, Rlw's, and Incognito's critiques are complete ^^ *throws out cupcakes* Any more ;) ?

Hey Incognito! This story resembles a short story I read a quite a while ago, too much for me to ignore. I'll link you to that story. Choice by W. ...

Mars just meant that you said "Paris Tipton" instead of "London Tipton". Yes, we do watch some television xD

Hey Rlw ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Michael stared almost hypnotically into the whirlpool of shadows that was the entrance to the ironically named sunlight falls woods. Oh, goodness ...