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Re: Sleep: Prologue 02
He followed Mooncry into the depths of the city, walking along the back allies and empty streets of the older parts of the New City. They entered a seemingly abandoned ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: The Hunter of Nightingale
Okay! Let's get down to the basics of this, going step by step. 1. "AS IT PIERCES A DOE'S BACK" I do things like this all the time when I'm ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Golden Waters (a Civil War short story)
I don't normally like, let alone read, historical fiction, but it's always good to broaden your horizons so I figured I'd click on your story. One correction in the first ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Trait (Chapter One and Two)
So far, I'm left rather curious by this first chapter, the Establishment and how the characters got their names specifically as well as why Trait distances himself. When it comes ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Sleep: Prologue 01
“Get down!” He didn’t even have time to turn around before one of them slammed him into the ground. “So there are terrorists here." He could hear her voice; practically ...
Jan 21, 2011
