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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Suicide note

    Hey! AngelLily here with a review! First off, this piece of work was very well written. And if you need someone to talk to I'm always here to talk if ...

    Dec 29, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: The woman with no name

    Hey there! I just wanna say wow! This is not what I was expecting at all, but in a good way! I think this was a nice poem. I think ...

    Feb 11, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Horror
    Re: Winter Heaven

    Hello there! I loved this piece! The way you wrote it is very beautiful, and I can see the image in my mind very clearly. For me, I smiled as ...

    Feb 10, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Stitched Heartbeat

    Hey, AngelLily with a review. First off, I just wanna say, wow. That was good. You did the dialog well. As far as grammar goes, in the beginning when it ...

    Aug 27, 2020

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: Old Ghost Swamp

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! That darn computer! Anyway, that was amazing! The suspense was awesome, and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! It felt ...

    Apr 28, 2020

  • Other » Other, General
    Re: What is Love?

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! I really love your writing, they are always so good! Okay, so I did see a few mistakes though. Here: “It weighs a tonne” It ...

    Apr 28, 2020

  • Short Story » Horror, Action / Adventure
    Re: I Kill Monsters (part 1)

    Hi! AngelLily with a review here. I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to reading more. This story has a nice flow and structure. Your descriptions were amazing ...

    Apr 28, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter- 1 One spring night

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! First, I just wanna say, wow! I loved this story and it really has me hooked, so you better write more, okay? Anyway, I liked ...

    Apr 28, 2020

  • Art » Spiritual, Other
    Re: Truth Behind the Lies.

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! Okay, so I love this piece of literature. It rings truth into every would that reads it. You made this story so relatable and that ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: That One Day We were in Love

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! First, I just want to say, “Welcome to the community!” I hope that you are enjoying your time here. Okay, so I liked your story. ...

    Apr 26, 2020

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: December Blues

    Hi! AngelLily with a review! I see that you are new to the community. Welcome! Okay, so I like the way you are writing this story. It gets me more ...

    Apr 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure
    Re: Chapter 5 first draft

    Hi! It’s AngelLily with a review! Happy review day! Okay, first off, I just want to say that I love it! The structure is pretty good and I like your ...

    Apr 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Literature
    Re: The Duskfall Howlers, Zeph Part 1

    Hi! It’s AngelLily with a review! Happy review day! Okay, I love how I was thrown right into action. It really drew me in and made me want to read ...

    Apr 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: A Story - Chapter 1: The Beginning

    Hi! It’s AngelLily here with a review! Happy review day! I hope you’re doing well. So, I really liked your beginning and I think this is a great start for ...

    Apr 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 25)

    Hi! It’s AngelLily! Happy review day! Alright, so, I haven’t read your other chapters, so if I say something dumb, you can ignore it or whatever. So, your beginning drew ...

    Apr 25, 2020


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri