Aneke

Well, I guess I'm going to be the oddball and beg to differ on the big-block-o'-text opinion. I know it's an English-class no-no. But I quite like it here. The ...

...And this is precisely why poetry is so difficult to critique. It's really all in the eye of the beholder. Rules don't really apply to poetry - and, frankly, some ...

The cirrus-streaked sky darkened as a thick haze rose from the bloody ground. A single man stood alone on the battlefield that was flooded with carnage. This is unnecessary; I ...

I like this story, I really do. But I have to agree somewhat with Griffinkeeper: the diary format doesn't quite work here. I think part of it is the fact ...

I like this a lot. I realize it's supposed to be literal - POV of a baby - but I think it works really well metaphorically in relation to the ...

If I was you, I would cut the first bit entirely, the part before the break. I mean, it could work, but I think the work is better without it. ...

When I say walking, I mean walking. Cars, are now illegal in the United states since 2040 (my father tells me) because they caused so much damage to the environment. ...