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I see what you mean, but I really wanted to keep everybody isolated from each other, wanting to interact, but too fearful to do it. Like the cat!

I threw in a little content to highlight Josh and Tim's relationship.

Yeah, after thinking about it, dumping all of Tim's actions on Josh doesn't work. I started making little revisions, and explaining Tim and Josh's relationship a bit more, or at ...

THANK YOU for spending so much time on this to review it. I'm really not the best with grammar, and I definitely need some pointers in that area. Although sometimes ...

Changed up the last line, how does it strike you now?

Thanks so much for reading this and giving a review! I did have a slightly different goal when it came to the cat bit. The point I wanted to make ...

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