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  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Thank you kindly. :)

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I hope these changes compliment your critiques. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Changed it up, as well as the others. Please tell me what you think. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Again, reviewed for your viewing pleasure. Hopefully these changes will allow for more complimenting aspects. :) Thank you for your sentiments and hopefully looking forward to publishing another soon.

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Appreciated. :)

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Modest Impressions

    To the critiques of the many, I hope the restructuring of how this piece is to be spoken helps with the reading. :) A compliment to all those who gave ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    Good afternoon Readers. To the contrary of structure I have reformed this piece so that may visualize as more a poem than a literary essay. :) I hope you find ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I appreciate kind to the praise. Thank you. :) And to answer your question the last two lines are accesss to the second stanza. Cut flowers being the lost art ...

    Mar 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Of course, again appreciate the critique. I was thinking the same thing

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Absolute Depth

    Thank you kindly. :) I'll consider the sentiment on structure.

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: The Lovebirds

    Of course. :)

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Indefinite Blue

    My review posted twice, but i guess all great things come in pairs right? Haha, have a good one

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    A fan of Lessing! :D It's not everyday he is brought up on casual conversation, so the sentiment is even more moving. Thank you. :)

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Grace in Diction

    I will give you just credit that free verse isn't the stereotypical structural pretense we give to what poetry is. But I will say that to the narrative poet, free ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Modest Impressions

    I will kindly repair that typo, thank you. And again appreciate fully your remarks. I am glad you enjoyed this piece so thoroughly. Though I would not be so bold ...

    Mar 25, 2015


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