AndreaMcD

I really liked this chapter, I think that it was very good so far. I noticed some grammar mistakes and a little spelling but other than that I think that ...

Your poem is awesome apart from some minor spelling mistakes.... tolled and ting..... but other than that i loved your poem I think it is awesome!! I think you should ...

I think your poem is good but it could use some help. Some of the lines do not rhyme and some do not make since. The line with the boy ...

Your poem is very good. It displays a definite storyline.