AndreaAthena

It's not bad but it needs to b edited a lot. There were some spelling and grammer mistakes. Here is a version with slight corrections: “Brooklyn could you please get ...

Hi! I just joined this yesterday! I'm not sure how to work it yet. xx

It was actually really cute! There are too many poems that are taken too seriously and this one is pretty and fun and it's absolutely perfect. Because it says exactly ...

I think it was very good! You get a feel for what Olivia is like straight away. Maybe you could drop hints as to what she and her Dad look ...

This is the first piece of writing I've reviewed on this site! I do see the resemblence this bears to Harry Potter- the letter, the school of msgic, the old ...

The Prologue Scarlett whisked between the trees like a shadow, white wings carrying her on the air. Her breath came quickly, but not because of the speed at which she ...