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Helllllo, I love this! This is how I feel like when I'm staring at my keyboard (though usually I'm more leaning towards wanting to erase everything one by one...) And ...

Helllllo, I started reading this and I really liked how you introduced the setting, putting the history of the place dispersed in the story instead of one great block of ...

Helllllo This reads like a poem, but in a good way. The word 'thud' repeated seemed off, but the end makes it funny, like a lead up to the punch ...