Anchees

Hey that was a very good story. I thought you could have put a lot more emotion into it. I don't know if I am right but a phrase like ...

A kind of an uninteresting topic that seemed rather incomplete in the end. I think you could have done a much better job with the characters of the story.

Hi, I liked your poetry. That One can be truly awoken (awaken)

Dear All, I know this is a bit lengthy. But please read and post your valuable comments. The garden was in full bloom with flowers of different colours in full ...

Hi, Very good, very touchingly dramatic. Keep it up.

Your opening line is not understood as it brings out no meaning and the grammar is bad. "Her Traces back to times........." (not understood)

Very, very good. I enjoyed the poem. Really very romantic and very well written. Would love to read some more of your work. Shabash and keep it up

Hi Kibble, That was good. Very Imaginative and fun to read. You must take care though to read before you submit your work. "Well, nobody, which is clearly why the ...

That is really good. You are really imaginative and can put your imaginative thoughts to paper extremely well. Very well written with the punctuation marks in place. Achees

Hi Zenjoy, Did you avoid to put capital letters at the beginning of sentences on purpose or was it just oversight? Since you have classified your writing as Lyric, I ...

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I think the word electricity in a love poem seemed a bit unromantic. You could probably replace it with 'shudder' or 'shiver' or 'sparkle' which may be more romantic. Anchees

Hi Fantasy, Very good, I liked you poem, short and sweet. I however think the use of commas would enhance its expression. Anyway I'm new to the creative writing as ...

Thanks Rachel and Pudin for reading my posts and commenting on them. I feel very secure with my writing now, knowing that I can write, and even if there are ...

Hello and welcome to the site! We're glad to meet you. You can use this thread to talk to fellow newbies or whatever, or you can make your own post ...