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Re: new kid on the block
Ms. Cade - Depends where you want to touch, but sure, probably. =D A.
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Re: Nonsense poem!
I agree with Ms. Leja - this definitely reminded me of the Jabberwock. It's a fun little piece, and the way you play with imagery is amusing and aesthetically pleasant ...
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Re: evangelical evangelists have eaten all our food again.
I have to agree with Mr. Jiggity - this is a crazy awesome poem! Your images are incredible and so vividly evocative, and the very words seem drenched in the ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: me
You've got a few good images here - I really love 'I am a song in minor key,' which is crazy evocative and tells the reader so much about the ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Under Ebony
You've got some really good material here, Ms. Lynn - it's just a little rambly. You say it's spur of the moment, so that's to be expected. Your images are ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: new kid on the block
Ms. Merry - Thanks for the kind (and inquisitive) welcome. Yes, there are lots of cabs, though I tend to walk or take the subway - much cheaper. Manhattan is ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Incisive Coalition
Karmic points right off the bat for using the word "vivisect." It's a wonderful one, i'n it? I must agree with Mr. Bellamy above: I can't find much of anything ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Billy and the Flowers
I like the concept behind this; it might function better as an abstract, maybe even stream-of-consciousness short story or piece of flash fiction. My only real criticism is of the ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: new kid on the block
Hey yo, I'm Anaïs. I'm one of the billion or so twenty-something poet-mystics in Manhattan trying to recapture the glory of the good old days. Plus, the other day I ...
Sep 8, 2008
