AnarchyWolf

Of course. I'm halfway through correcting it now. If you want to edit a story after you've posted it, then look on the right hand side of the story, down ...

Sure. I don't mind at all. It'll help me with my writing. Shall I correct it now and PM it to you? -AnarchyWolf

Thanks for reviewing :) How could I improve the dialogue? The fact that Adrian didn't set off the alarm at the beginning, when Wolf let him go, should've suggested at ...

It's fine :) And I have faith in Janos. I probably should've looked at the glossary before reading, huh. Anyway, as always, you're welcome. -AnarchyWolf :)

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you like it :) And yes, Wolf has definitely 'been through some serious shit'. He's a 'regular' human, though. Not a shapeshifter ...

Can't wait to read it :)

Thanks for the review :) Sorry for my late reply, I've been travelling. I really need to work on my sentences, it seems. Thanks for all the pointers :)

Thanks for the review :) Your review helped a ton and now I know what to work on :) ((His actual name is Nikolai, but he absolutely hates being called ...

Thanks for the review! I really need to work on the city, yeah (and I'll need to get Nik to stop saying 'drugs' outloud, heh). On the note of skydiving, ...

Thanks for the review! In my next chapter I'll do more about the setting and work on everything :) -AnarchyWolf

Oooh my first review! Thanks for the pointers :) I agree with the commas - I put waayyy too many of them - and everything else, for that matter. And ...

Ooohh I get it now. Thakns :)