AnNguyenLe

Thanks so much :) These reviews are very helpful and will certainly help my writing which is the whole point. I'll try to improve as much as I can.

I am amazed. Just purely amazed. I never thought people could describe love in a computer sense. I love how you describe romantic touches suche as And strokes on a ...

This poem has a pretty nice rhyming lines. I certainly love the message you conveyed. I love how you describe life and its struggle as well as you message of ...

~hi I am An -16 years old (male) -loves sad stuff -love Romance -vietnamese -i have no idea why i am here in the first place O.o nice to meet ...

A little rough story in my head... -A boy who has lucid dreams,fell in love with a girl from his dreams. A love circle forms between An, Xuan, Phu, and ...

I am struck in awe O.o Your story catch the attention of the reader and have plenty of suspense as well having a tense mood. I really like it. The ...

To be honest, this story scares me. Then again it's the story and stories supposed to be like that. i feel the story lack a few "detail" and i have ...

A true story with a happy ending huh. Anyways, I love how you express your feelings and describe the events in parts. Even though it's not detailed, it's enough for ...

The story was interesting. You describe his actions well and made a unique character. However, it showed run on sentences, grammar mistakes, as well as few spelling errors. Also it ...

Hmm..everything is perfect so far, however you left me hanging. Did Robyn found her perfume yet or is that going to happen later?

Story was good and i like the mood you created in this part. However the first paragraph confuses me. Mostly on the second sentence “Where the hell is my new ...

You were there for me always by my side so cheerful, caring, kind I held you tighly my one and only nothing but memories.