Amylith

Wow, I loved this! I don't know if it's exactly "old-style" language, but whatever kind of language it is, I like it. Your descriptions are so strong, I could literally ...

I liked this story. It was cute and sweet and easy to understand, even if it is a little cliche. Everyone likes a little bit of that every once in ...

I liked the beginning of this poem, but I liked it less as I kept reading. I'll just go line by line (I'll make my suggestions in red ) : ...

To be honest with you, I really didn't want to read this. From the title, it sounded to me like it was going to be another Twilight. But it definitely ...

I like this piece as a outline or an idea, but it isn't exactly a story. It needs to be beefed up a little bit to go as far as ...

There were some parts of this poem that I really liked and I loved how they rhymed, for example: People keep asking questions about where you go when you die, ...

Wow this is really cool! I would have never thought to arrange a poem like that! And on top of that, the poem itself isn't bad. It reminds me of ...

I'm going to have to be the odd one out of the bunch and say that I liked this. It's not solid, if you understand that, it's more on the ...

Thanks for the warning about this being really dark. I'm sure I'll have nightmares :) Other than having no idea whatsoever what was going on in this (probably because I ...

When I was reading the beginning of this, I thought I wasn't going to like it (because I don't normally like stories that are all hardcore or involve gangs and ...

I really like this too! As I started reading it, I thought I knew exactly what it was going to be about (which could be a good thing or a ...

This was a really good story. I liked that it described the music more than just generally, but also talking about the sopranos, altos, etc. I was also fascinated by ...

At first, before I read any of this, I didn't think I was going to make it all the way through because it was so long, but it really sucked ...

I agree with you that there are a lot of stupid people out there (and, if they're too stupid, I can't stand to have to listen to them talk for ...

I wasn't sure about the title so if anyone has any suggestions that would be great. Sorry it's a little long :\ My life started out well enough, or at ...