Amylith

Since you wrote this for English class, I'm assuming that you had some kind of outline that you had to follow and length requirements and all that. I've never read ...

I just got a really nice camera over Christmas, and these are a couple pictures I took just practicing. Let me know what you think! ~Amylith

This is a very unique and interesting poem, both because you used two languages and because of the topic you chose to write about. Just now I looked back (because ...

This is a cool poem. It kind of reminds me of one of those nursery rhymes from elementary school that taught you a lesson, but this poem has a sci-fi ...

Throw me down in a bed of roses. Teach me to love the sting of their thorns. For, how can you enjoy the flowers without feeling the pain of their ...

I'm pretty new to photography, but I do understand some of it so I'll try to give you a good review. So first of all, my favorite picture is "Washed ...

This is a really interesting poem. I've never read "Whore's Bath" so I can't review it based on that, so I'll just say what I think about this poem alone. ...

I like this poem. It has a nice flow to it and you used a lot of really descriptive words. The only thing I didn't like was that I don't ...

This poem says a lot of things that are very true. It's basically the poetic version of the definition of realism (and that isn't a bad thing!). I like that ...

Awwwwwww! :) This is such an adorable story! And you wrote it when you were thirteen? That's some good writing! I'm not sure if you want a serious critique since ...

This poem is so true! That is, if it's about what I think it's about. But, anyway, as far as the form of it goes, it's pretty good. The rhythm ...

I agree with you that Speak was a very good book, but I don't remember any of the specifics of it right now, so don't base my review on that. ...

This is really good writing. I'm assuming it's a chapter from a book you're writing? Your descriptions are really good, especially the scene where she fights the bear. The only ...

I'm guessing that since you wrote this so long ago that your writing has improved since then, but it's nice to go back and look at old things you've written. ...

I tapped my foot impatiently as the man in front of me waved his hands animatedly, obviously hoping to get his point across more clearly. He introduced himself as Dr. ...