Amylith

will never ran out of ammunition I would change to "would never run out" yet he ran with a speed at admirable pace I would take out "with a speed" ...

Hi! I'm sorry to say that I haven't read the first four chapters of this book, but after reading this chapter, I just might (when I have time, that is). ...

Hey buddy :) It's really interesting how your old stuff is so different from the new stuff, but I can still tell that it's your voice. Anyway, there are some ...

Hi! First of all, I have to say that I really liked the subject of this piece. It's about hurting someone and feeling bad about it after you did it, ...

The walls were littered with images, a funeral feeling about the room. Somber, angry, wasted. There were tears gathering in her eyes, small and worn and utterly, almost terribly alive; ...

I am an acrobat on the highwire. Below, demons jeer, Hell's dogs sneer. And I step. Flames tickle my feet as the wire burns my soles. The platform watches with ...

When I'm left alone in the quiet to think, I remember the coolness of so many empty shells. Friends, loved ones, all dressed up and laid out for that final ...

A poem touches down and flutters like a butterfly, a lovely image hovering. Its wings are strings of words beckoning you closer to read, to listen, to understand. Words beat ...

I sit inside my window pane to keep away the pouring rain, and laugh at all the little drops running down like silly props pretending all is beautifully sad and ...

It was warm but breezy as I walked down my driveway. The relief from the sweltering heat signaled the beginning of fall, the season of death. Already leaves had fallen ...

Some of my favorite pictures that I've taken. Feel free to comment on just one or two rather than all of them; I know there are a lot.

Laden with ice and swaying in the bitter Alaskan wind , the pines crackled in an eerie orchestra that could be mistaken for the thrashing and snapping of a wild ...

Hey it's me. :) Glad you joined. Anyway I know I just told you this, but this story is really good. I'm jealous. I wish I could write this well. ...

Wow I loved the ending to this! I'm sorry to say that I didn't read the first part, but now I wish I had because I liked it so much ...

This is a great story/excerpt! I love how nice Jett is to Elijah, it's more like a brotherly relationship, and you present it really well. The only thing I would ...