Amy

WOW, i really like your writing. it tells me an important sory- although i have a few suggestions. I trip over sidewalks, I trip over plants I trip over pebbles ...

This was written well! i love how the poem rhymes, and goes to with the flow. Would low-fat be okay? No, I would not mind. Because this healthy treat cannot ...

i found this written very well. The lines that stood out most to me were "My hand holds the mysteries of the future too. Something to become or to put ...