AmorOccidit

I loved this. It send little waves of happiness through my body since it reminded me of my boyfriend and me. Good work. The only problem is when you said ...

I liked it very much but whats really bothering me is the question why did the vicar run? Just work on connecting Carmen to the story and I will enjoy ...

When the scared-looking soldier stepped out of the woods with his hands raised I was pretty sure that he wanted to surrender but my sergeant shot him anyway. “What was ...

I am not a fan of James Blunt or of Viktor Krum but this story made me put those feelings aside. This was beautifully written and they way the story ...

I'm glad that you used words like "mental" and "mate" that seemed to make it sound more like Harry and Ron. I'm not going to keep hitting the dead horse ...

HI my name is AmorOccidit and I am a new member here. I joined cause it looked likle fun and I am always llooking for ways to improve my writing. ...