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I like how this story has two main characters. It adds a whole other side to the story. I'm glad you explained who Connor was, and why she had to ...

Haha I like this. The sarcasm was a nice change from everything else I've been reading today, so thank you for that. But I like the point that you (sort ...

You're right, I think it is lacking something, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I'm a little confused about what this poem is about though. It just ...

I liked this one. I felt like it took a small step for the story, but at least now you know what he's going to do next. But I think ...

Hi! Well, this piece certainly has a lot of potential! ;) To me, it seems like you started at the end of a story. Bt I want to know what ...

I liked this piece, although it sounds oddly familiar to The Thief Lord. Anyways, I liked the description in this piece, especially in the beginning. I also liked how you ...

I really liked this piece. First of all, it's an entirely new concept, which I love, and also I like the mystery in here. The mystery him, how he came ...

I liked this poem. I liked how it showed conflict within the person. Also, some of the lines in there were really deep, especially the lines at the end. Anyways, ...

I really like this song. It's so cheery and fun! I have a question though: Why of all animals did you choose a giraffe? I mean, they're cute and funny ...

Wow. This was really powerful. Please tell me if there's another part to this, because I want you to continue this. The description and emotion were so strong, and I ...

Hi! I think personally out of all of them, the second one, the Pyromania one was the poem I liked the best. I don't know if it was the shape ...

It sounds sick, I know, but for whatever reason this story made me smile. I wasn't sure if this was the goal, but I liked at the end how two ...

Oh my gosh this was amazing! :D For whatever reason, I fell in love with this piece! First of all, I love that it was dedicated to someone that died. ...

Hi! I don't really read poetry that often, but I really liked this. I don't know what it was, but this was beautiful. The emotion was perfect, and so was ...

Hi! I actually thought the 2nd person perspective in this was really cool, and it really set this piece apart from others. Although it made me sad at the end, ...