AmeliaCogin

Hi, thanks for your thoughts. I think being descriptive is one of my strongpoints but I agree I did overdo it a little in this piece. As I said, It ...

Hi everyone :) I couldn't sleep last night and this absurd idea just popped into my head for a story. I just had to write it. It's a bit odd, ...

Hi, I loved this story. Very imaginative! Your writing flows really well. There were a few things I found confusing, but I'm not picking them out because other reviews have ...

This story is just too cool! I think sometimes it great to push the brilliant yet depressing stories aside and read a quirky, ludicrously cheerful piece. I think, though, it ...

Hi there, I enjoyed this piece, it was quite imaginative. Your writing could be made a little more dramatic and could have more impact if the sentences were a little ...

I loved this. So brilliant. I just wanted to keep reading and reading. You're a very talented writer - I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks! Fab read! :)

I loved this story so much. Very original and quite moving. I always try and anticipate where a story is going, but with 'pieces of time', I couldn't tell. That's ...

Cute and very imaginative. It like the whole fairytale concept - ie, "once upon a time". A few minor mistakes but very clever and unique. I liked it a lot! ...

I liked this. Very moving. Unique, too, I suppose. I've never thought of writing in the form of a letter as you obviously have. It's quite original. Although there were ...

Thanks for your comments. It's the first story I've ever posted and I wasn't too sure of the reaction I was going to get. It was inspired by a news ...

Really enjoyed this story. The quality of your writing is excellent :)

Blink. Blink. Blink. Eyes sting with smoke. Inhale. Lungs fill with the fibres of decaying flesh and disease. Listen. Ears ring, noise pounds into my skull like a drum. It ...